September 6th, 2010
Chap 2 Pg 10
Hey- what do you guys say to stopping the adventures of Cleo and Khensu right here and instead follow the two bandits wandering around the wastelands of Hykosis for the rest of the comic? #walletyperobotalloveragain





September 6th, 2010 at 8:38 am
I don’t mind following the Hykosis bandits for a while, as long as it doesn’t sidetrack the story for too long. For that matter, parallel storytelling is cool too, if it’s well-balanced.
Cleo’s going to have to catch up with them at some point, right? So why not?
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September 6th, 2010 at 12:44 pm
Don’t you DARE stop the adventures of Cleo and Khensu!
Besides, the bandits story will probably come to an abrupt halt when they try drilling into that bag of Cleo’s.
FWOOOOMPH!
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September 6th, 2010 at 1:35 pm
Yes. Ditch Cleo and the cat. Follow these guys and change the name of the strip to something like, “One Guy, Two Guy, Green Guy, Blue Guy”
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September 6th, 2010 at 3:46 pm
ah yes…con current & harmonious story telling. This is your jedi training :)
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September 6th, 2010 at 4:03 pm
I suspect that Cleo is not going to be far behind these two guys …
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September 6th, 2010 at 8:33 pm
This is awesome. I love a sexy female butt kicking heroine. Keep it up!
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September 6th, 2010 at 10:49 pm
Nice, found you from your pvp guest strip :)
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September 7th, 2010 at 2:11 am
“Oh yeah, we were supposed to KEEP that!”
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September 7th, 2010 at 6:04 am
I really wish I knew what was in that bag…..
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September 7th, 2010 at 3:25 pm
Well I would like to see what the Bandits are going to do with Cleo’s makeup case. However I agree with JD!
Loved your PVP Guest strip! I guess you CAN draw scantily clad gals! LMAO
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September 8th, 2010 at 10:23 am
Ehhh. Stick with the story line, but then you can have the story line be about Cleo following these losers, while trying to get her bag back.
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September 8th, 2010 at 1:16 pm
Sit, stay, follow or flee, I don’t mind as long as there is more of it.
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September 8th, 2010 at 7:47 pm
This comic is *awesome*! I just stumbled over it after seeing the PVP comic (also awesome, btw…Jade’s dress was purdy) and now I’ve pretty much looked through the entire site. I can’t get enough. ^_^
….But whatever happened to people liking multiple character viewpoints? It’s still flowing nicely and it’s advancing the plot–I’m really enjoying it! And I love Cleo’s hair.
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September 9th, 2010 at 11:18 am
haha! don’t worry guys! i’m not stopping the story to follow two unnamned bandits nomading though a desert. that would be boo-rrrr-iiing.
and a big welcome to those of you who found Cleo though PVP. nice to meet you! i hope Cleo’s slow weekly schedule won’t stop you from keeping up with the comic. i have some really fun stuff planned.
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September 9th, 2010 at 7:22 pm
Hey, it might not be so boring, authors have done more with less :)
Since you do update only once a week I’ll probably check back in a month or two from now and see what’s happened – the strip-a-week thing is hard for maintaining my attention when it’s a story and not just one-offs. But I really like what you’re doing!
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September 10th, 2010 at 5:32 pm
i do not mind anyone only stopping by every couple of months to read this comic in chunks. it probably reads better that way! i just ask that you don’t forget about me. ;)
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September 11th, 2010 at 11:04 pm
Also came here from PvP and really like the style of your artwork. Also got a rather interesting setting. I look forward to seeing more.
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September 15th, 2010 at 5:01 pm
Not stopping for unnamed bandits? What if we call the m Slim and Fatso? Oops.
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November 15th, 2010 at 11:08 am
If the bandits are planning on tunneling out, I think their drill will need to grow a bit. {bad pun, I know.}
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